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I´d like to help poor children.They hasn't anything,they can't go to school,they can´t eat,they haven't clothes.
If I sell my old toys in a second hand shop I win some money and with this I help for the poor children.They can get foods or clothes,or the governments can build schools,houses and hospitals.
I can give some of my clothes to the church and I work at the weekends to help the children.
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Debbie
Hi Pilar
ResponderEliminarThanks for posting your homework assignment. Here are my comments / corrections:
I´d like to help poor children.They (hasn't) HAVEN'T GOT anything: they can't go to school,they can´t eat,they haven't GOT clothes.
If I sell my old toys in a second hand shop I (win) WILL EARN some money and with this I CAN help (for) the poor children.They can get food(s) or clothes,or the government(s) can build schools,houses and hospitals.
I can give some of my clothes to the church and I work at the weekends to help the children.
WELL DONE. HOWEVER, YOUR TEXT DOESN'T FOLLOW THE OUTLINE (ESQUEMA) THAT WAS IN THE STUDENT'S BOOK. THIS IS A GREAT START! NONETHELESS, PLEASE TRY TO FOLLOW THE INSTRUCTIONS MORE CAREFULLY IN YOUR NEXT POST.